My Chinese is now at the stage where I'm able to write short stories (maybe a few paragraphs). I like to Google "writing prompts" and find one that interests me, and write about that.
I'd like to begin posting short stories I've written myself and get my writing reviewed, much like what CodeReview.SE does for code.
It's getting harder for me to pinpoint my weaknesses. It's less often about is this right or wrong? and more often about is this a good way to express my meaning? To this end, comparing how someone else would write something vs. my own writing is quite helpful: even if I write correctly, other people write far more succinctly and elegantly.
Beyond grammar and word choice, I'm interested in humor, tension and suspense, believability, plot twists, etc.
Question: How should I go about writing "review my writing" requests?
There's often parts that I'm especially uncomfortable about, e.g., unfamiliar grammar structures, new words, which I can highlight as potential weaknesses. But I'm also interested in identifying weaknesses that I'm unaware of.
Update: To give an idea of what I have in mind, I asked a question here: Writing critique request: Zhou Ziwang and the revolutionary new technology Perhaps we'll see how it goes. I added a new tag writing-critique, and if it goes well, I'll probably post more of these. But those who don't like this style of question can ignore the writing-critique tag.